In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
The number of crime in many countries is increasing day by day. There are different major causes of crime is seen in the society, and the government try to solve this major issues by using different techniques.
In the society, there are different types of crime is seen, like murder, rape, robbery and etc. And their causes are different. People kills another people due to property reason, for money or for any personal issue. On the other hand, rape is one of the major crime which is increasing gradually. The main reason behind it is lack of social awareness and lack of proper law enforcement. Besides this, porn addiction is another cause of rape. Although robbery has decreased, but steeling others good or property has just increased. It is because of unemployment and lack of job. That's why, people to find out easy way to earn money by steeling others product or money.
How can we overcome or prevent this type of causes of crime? It depends on various factors. Firstly, we have to enforce proper law and aware everyone about this law. Secondly, we have to increase social awareness and teach people that how a crime destroy their whole life? And also tell them about negative consequences of a single crime. Finally, as unemployment is another major issue of crime, so we have to create more job sector. And we have to give proper education and basic facilities of an individual in a society.
In conclusion, although we cannot eliminate crime properly, but we can reduce its occurrence by taking above steps.
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Suggestion: etc.
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Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82509505703 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54481439893 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8511078869 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7894736842 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248736711899 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781183457917 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779158601529 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155602837917 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424506908743 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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