You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realized that you will not be able to go.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize.
- explain why you will not be able to meet your friend
-suggest where and when you could see each other instead
Dear Paul,
How are you? Hope you're doing well and your family is fine.
I am writing to inform you that I wont be able to come to play badminton next week as we had planned. I understand that we had planned this meeting as per my schedule and I truly apologize for cancelling at the last moment.
My company is sending me for a short training to Delhi on Monday and I will be coming back after 3 weeks. My manager has selected me to attend the training on the basis of my performance. My promotion is due next month and this training is very paramount for me for my career growth.
However, I suggest we meet on the falling weekend after I am back from Delhi. I would like to invite you for a dinner party at my residence. This dinner would be special as I will be cooking myself. Also, we can spend more time catching up on things rather than meeting for games or a coffee. Please let me know your availability.
See you soon,
Albert
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Paul, How are you? Hope youre doing well and your family is fine. ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...raining on the basis of my performance. My promotion is due next month and this tr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29444444444 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.373067765 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.803250424 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4615384615 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228946251819 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086769537206 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538868862175 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156650677761 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778813544372 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.