In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss and give your own opinion?
Good education and medical facilities are basic needs of everyone without this no country says they are developed country. A school of thought concers that the medical facilties and education are very important for us but others consider that they have already this type of faciliities in urban areas. In my opinion, i would like say that on my further paragraphs in ths side of government should work on these facilities in rural areas. To start with, Everyone wants to medical facilities and education in these days because without it impossible to growth our country. Government should work on these facilities in rural areas because everyone is equal. If our youth is healthy then our country is also healthy. For example, United States Of America provide these facilities to their people and they get a tag of Powerful country. Secondly, Now our youth are educated then we can prove ourself in every field of the United Nation. So i want our governmenmt should great work on these facilities because these facilities are very needful for us. Moreover, our youth wants the good quality of these facilities for thier health. To conclude, i would like to say that these facilities are very needful for every country because without this impossible to develop our country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... rural areas because everyone is equal. If our youth is healthy then our country i...
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...in every field of the United Nation. So i want our governmenmt should great work ...
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...cilities for thier health. To conclude, i would like to say that these facilities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98122065728 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54713765766 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49765258216 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2287792955 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19463902852 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931407648849 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700529423106 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19463902852 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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