Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
A future university student has to make decisions about his/her residency sometimes even before making any decision about the university itself. Some give the higher significant to studying in the same city as the parents and some choose to move out and experience independence and adulthood life.
Starting university is regarded as a pivotal point in a person’s life as the chosen major will be the person’s job, probably for the next 30 to 40 years. Consequently, what we gain from this education has undeniable significance on our lives. Having a shining performance during the bachelor degree is the first prerequisite of receiving admission and financial aid for the master and doctorate degree. Studies confirmed students who stay with their parents during university education, tend to have a more shining performance in comparison to ones who are living independently because parents will take care of everything just as they do in their child’s high school period. However, the academic aspect is only one of the many aspects that university students are going to gain experience at.
Social interaction is coupled with university life and being exposed to cultural diversity is an excellent opportunity that living in a dormitory can offer. Living with other mates is a life-saving practice that will teach us how to efficiently get along with others and how to manage the work-fun balance. Many students admit that dealing with their first foreigner roommate was not an easy job at the beginning, but they happen to bond at the end, irrespective of their cultural differences. A survey done by the University of Chicago reported that parents believe their child has made impressive personality development and is acting more responsibly since he/she has attended university in a different city.
Bearing in mind that university life has a wide array of roles to play in our lives, living apart from parents is an excellent chance of character evolvement. Despite the fact that it might have some short-term unwanted outcome, such as bad grades and feeling homesick at the beginning, the final outcome is so invaluable that we could claim it does worth it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, apart from, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19830028329 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92159609527 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603399433428 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7650011219 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.153846154 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291739490104 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904219911308 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618404546265 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15568756746 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845544506217 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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