Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books.
What is your opinion?
It is an undeniable fact that the number of parents considers reading novels, comics, and magazines as a waste of time. They prefer their children should read only academic books. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the above statement. In this essay, I shall put forth my arguments to support my opinion and also discuss why some parents consider reading extra books as a waste of time.
Parents always want their children to score well in academic studies. They think if children spend most of their time reading irrelevant books than it would be hard for them to stay focus on their studies. To illustrate this, according to the survey conducted by the University of Leeds, 7 out of 10 parents in U.K want their children to read only their curriculum books. Moreover, parents want their children to perform better in today's cut-throat competition.
However, I believe parents should not stop children from reading books other than their subjects. This is because reading helps children to enhance their learning abilities and make them independent learners. Moreover, they get a chance to know more about their field of interest which will definitely help them in the future with lucrative opportunities. For instance, according to the research done by the University of America, children those have a habit of reading books are good at decision-making and creative skills.
In conclusion, Despite parents consider entertainment books as a bad choice for the children, it helps with the development and growth of them. In my opinion, parents should allow children to read what they want so that they can grow to their full potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09594095941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7079742519 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6207346175 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.547622966118 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199066753836 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101614789408 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348187213803 0.151304729494 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316009285638 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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