A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is the corner stone for any nation. It is the best investment a country can do to its people for removing poverty and shaping its future. As Dewey's say "Education is not preperation of life , Education is life itself" .
After finishing primary and secondary high school students enter into college . Students coming from different borads or background need to follow same syllabus who choose same field of study. Here becomes the difficulties for the student for being from heterogenous background. Some students are up to the mark to manage the syllabus and do well whereas some struggel to stdy the same. For example, some boards have solid geometry as part of high school maths syllabus where as some doesn't have. Now the students who has taken maths as their major in college will have to sudy solid geometry. Students who have already study the same in their school will have the advantage and it would be easier for them to grasp the advance part of it quickly.
Moreover, this is not a concern for students only , from teacher's perspective also it is quite easier to teach students from homogenous level of knowledge. It would make progress qickly. Again we can also assume the example mentioned in the above paragraph. If all students more or less have the same knowledge of solid geometry , it would quick for the teacher to go to the advance part of it.
Universities use various parameter to judge a student before proceeding for admission. So if the nation follows same curriculum , it would be appropriate in measuring the knowledge of the students based on the parameters.
As for every progress there are somde road blocks , for this case also exception doesn't happen. Students are coming from different family background , from different parts of the country . There are 40 states in USA , to maintain the same level of education everywhere is really challenging. Infrastructure in city and rural area is not same. Even there are so many immigrant students who are not proficient in Eglish at all. These hindrance should be treated with high importance so that these can be eradicated at all.
In conclusion , it is always advisable to follow same curriculumn in a country. It would enhance the development. It is true that roadblocks are there .If roadblocks can be removed it would be a great progress for the nation as students are the future of any nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, whereas, as for, for example, in conclusion, it is true, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94554455446 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74293296144 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497524752475 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6752490711 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.92 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.16 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225963836379 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620158887006 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529731681829 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125131059362 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324536965006 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.