In this modern world it is possible to shop work and communicate with a people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others. It is a positive or negative development in your opinion. To what extent do you support this development.
Indeed, it is true fact to consider that internet has become an important part of humans’ life. In this regard, majority of people like to use web in order to delve the remedies of health issues which are confronted by them. According to me, several problems are faced by the people when they use internet to find solutions of health issues.
To begin with, the lack of knowledge of using web is first disadvantage of using it to find medical solutions. In some nations, majority of the people have no knowledge to find out the solutions of the health issues. Thereby, it will be hard for them to find correct and appropriate remedies for health issues. Recent research report of UN reveals that so many people lost their life because they used internet to find solutions of chronic diseases. Thus, using web to treat with health issues may be dangerous for people.
In addition to this, it is fact that information given on web is not reliable and accurate. If people treat themselves using false information without any factual result, they may develop their disease up to uncontrolled condition. Thereby, people will face enormous health issues in their life. Recently, my friend was treating with toe injury by taking information from web, but he put himself in trouble. Nowadays, he is getting pills to treat skin infection. Therefore, I say, internet may not be used to treat health issues.
Although internet is used by people for various tasks, it should not be used to treat with diseases because of lack of knowledge to people and false information on web.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...th issues which are confronted by them. According to me, several problems are faced by the peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89962825279 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57343601687 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8064928221 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128600174912 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506180286256 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312737246115 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941907550628 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229500823719 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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