Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this.
Nowadays, in the advance technology, the world became the globle village and so that more and more countries are increasing their good relationship. For this reason, individuals have bent into same products or things which is popular in the world. I will discuss my points view in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, the powerful technology has changed the world and became small as well. Every countries maintained their relationship with each-other and as a result the communication and business dealings are increasing amongst them. Moreover, effective and faster technology has made universal system. So, each people become smart and understand about reality of the world because of advance technology. Moreover, each people have smart gadgets which are helping and introducing of the smart world, and its provide the information regarding all products and their specialties of each and every corner of the world. For example, fashion designing, cooking, branded products and other costly things.
On the flip side, todays, every nations are destroying their traditional identity of their cultural , and people are using more and more international branded products and fashions. That is the reason, the specialties of culture's value turned into a common place. Moreover, through this reason humans never inspire and get understand the rare cultural which make exciting more whose want know about different cultural.
To sum-up, the global village has made universal system, more people are using this technology and they accepted international brand products and fashion styles, but eventually every countries are losing their cultural identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ged the world and became small as well. Every countries maintained their relationship...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nations are destroying their traditional identity of their cultural , and people ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... traditional identity of their cultural , and people are using more and more inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60714285714 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72234761801 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7069629547 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143960658233 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500522651555 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043114359347 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087032628773 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327766126902 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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