As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all worker?
While matures take working as a big part of their life, many of them can't have a job that meets their expectation. In this essay, I will share my point of view about job satisfaction's ingredients and the reality that most of workers met.
Firstly, I believe everyone wants a reasonably paid job. Because living an adult life ain't' easy, besides of expenditure for house rent, eating and other essential activities, a grown man also need money on saving or entertaining. A well-paid job could help the employee make the living. Secondly, people put the question that does this job suit with their strong point or not? To rocket and reach to a high position in career, the suitable of the job plays an important role on. Finally, stress also a contributor to the unsatisfaction in working. Stress can be caused by the employer, colleagues, or the requirement of finishing the work. All of these three factors are the main explanation for an adult can't meet the job of their dream.
Most workers can't meet their satisfaction with their job. According to a social survey, every 8 in 10 mature claims that they don't feel the work fulfil with their wishes and 6 of them don't like the work. Some even can't afford the living by working because of the contrast between low payment and high budget of living standard where they live.
In concluding, job fulfilment is incredibly vital to a wellbeing of a person, but not every time that they can archive the work of their dream.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... a big part of their life, many of them cant have a job that meets their expectation...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...ctions ingredients and the reality that most of workers met. Firstly, I believe everyone want...
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Suggestion: ain't
... paid job. Because living an adult life aint easy, besides of expenditure for house ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s are the main explanation for an adult cant meet the job of their dream. Most work...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t the job of their dream. Most workers cant meet their satisfaction with their job....
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Suggestion: don't
..., every 8 in 10 mature claims that they dont feel the work fulfil with their wishes ...
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Suggestion: don't
... fulfil with their wishes and 6 of them dont like the work. Some even cant afford th...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...6 of them dont like the work. Some even cant afford the living by working because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68725868726 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59224935375 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.881963521 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35555527703 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12011179017 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903836515436 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204058051699 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683753783598 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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