TPO6: Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Everything was changing slightly every day to become better than before. Some people believe that the new society is far easier to live than in the past. On the other hand, others think that life is less harsh and distinct when our grandparents were children. From my point of view, with the help of many technologies, people live easier than before.
Above all, we spend less time and become less stressful to get useful information. The only thing we need to do is write down the topic with details, then click the search button on google and the all related information appear on the screen less than a second. When my grandparents were children, they have only books to search for information because they did not have anything like Google and the internet. It takes plenty of time to get the right information from many books maybe an hour on average. If they do not get it, they would probably become nervous and stressed. Moreover, it is easier to do things now such as to wash. My younger sister who is three years old could wash clothes with the help of a washing machine.
Furthermore, the comfort level of technologies reaches its highest point nowadays. Because to relax is vital to recharge yourself in this rapidly growing society. Take a look at clothes as an example. When my grandparents were a child, the material of clothes was limited and somewhat uncomfortable because of the availability. They did not have any pyjamas, slippers and the not soft at all. In contrast, nowadays brand new soft material invented which makes the clothes more soft and comfortable than it is in the past.
In conclusion, people invent many discoveries which make the life easier and comfortable that are the two things everyone wanted and needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ies reaches its highest point nowadays. Because to relax is vital to recharge yourself ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82781456954 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56871701279 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6007207518 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244008400613 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657523366814 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673210293474 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150631587591 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660323866889 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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