Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The dynamics of the modern world are shifting at a wild pace. Nowadays, Electronic media is in the reach of everyone and it has a huge effect on us as they show the lifestyle and controversies of famous people. In the same context, some school of business feels that this coverage has a secluded effect on the modern generation as teenagers believe them as a incarnation of god, however, i do not feel the same as it is company that matters.
Admittedly, Children follow the new trends in the market and they are started by the various stars. Everyone have their favourites and they want to clone them. Undoubtedly, while cloning they adopt their bad habits such as smoking etcetera which has a lot of bad effect. Shah rukh khan is a chain smoker and many started smoking because of him, is a silent example of this. Apart from that, Media creates fake controversies due to which celebrities get publicity and this effect the modern generation as they start believing that committing crime will make them famous.
Despite such facts, It is psychologically proven that friend and family plays an important role in adoption of new habits. During the teenage, Everyone make new friends and in that company if children are living in ill-society then there are high chances that teenagers adopts bad habits. Even the less, Parents do not participate in their child lives and they start feeling depression which is the major root of all the bad habits and problems in the world.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, I convicts that media plays a supporting role while friends and family are major reasons which effect the child in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'convict'
Suggestion: convict
.... Having dwelled on such thoughts, I convicts that media plays a supporting role whil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82269503546 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56294433569 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8411365128 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165049224097 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563010630313 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445938621817 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102268231036 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419565066967 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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