People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details andexamples in your answer.
Life became more fast in modern world than previous. Always rushing in metros, in traffic to go to work. Long working hours to keep in competition. Competition nowadays is upto such an extent that one might become obsolete in such a short term like a month. One have to work hard to be updated to compete in modern world. This scenario put great pressure and stress on individual. With such an exetent of stress one have to keep living. One can have many ways to relieve this stress and refresh their mind for next difficulty. Reading, exercising, meditating, etc are the different thing one can do in their free time to reduce stress and to endure future difficulties.
Meditation is the ancient way to calm your mind and focus on thing you are doing. Daily five to ten minute meditation gives whole day mental energy to handle stress and to keep focused on your work. It gives refreshment and improve your efficincy. It also helps in crisis time. Australian cricket players did meditation before the final match of worldcup 2003 to handle stress of final match and keep focused on playing.
Reading is a hobby of many people. They read novels, bio-graphies, short stories in their free time. Through reading they can live a world of another person, fantasise the thing that are not real in this world, escape the reality and indulge in imaginery world. They live in that fantasy world while reading and can explore the world through someone's experience. It is one of the best thing to relieve the stress and also you can learn about different things.
Many people prefer playing sports, videogames, walking, writing, etc to take a break from stress and difficulties. Making new friends and talking to people is also one of the best stress reliever. In the end i can say that you can do whatever you to reduce stress, it is your choice to make what makes you happy. Do the things you like and be happy because you cannot remove difficulties from your life. So learn to handle stress, make hobbies, give some time to people important in your life and be happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70247933884 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4031261656 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2494089785 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.125 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.791666666667 5.45110844103 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312638159833 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818130794485 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529129042217 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171023374535 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684756461025 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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