Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Adolescence and adult phases, both bring happiness to a person's life. The scale by which we measure differs from person to person. While some people argue that teenage days are the happiest, others deny this in favor of adult life, however which we will discuss here.
Firstly, people siding adult life, point out to the fact that they are independent and free to make their own decisions. Young people for instance decide their life partners and make career choices out of their passion. Moreover adult life is when people can explore the world such as going on a trip around the globe, make adventures happen. All these can be made possible despite the fact that adults have family burdens and commitments on their shoulders.
On the other hand, immense number of people believe that adolescence brings more happiness in most people's lives. The reason they put forth is that, teenagers don't have any responsibilities unlike the adults. They are carefree and can do whatever they want to do to be happy. For example, most teenagers tend to change their hobbies and interests which they have been following from their childhood days, which is a tedious task for adults. Adding to these, adolescent minds can think freely without any family or societal constraints. Their ideas will not be discriminated however small it may be, whereas, people expect adults' ideas to be bigger and to have an out of the world thinking.
On recapitulating all the above arguments, although it looks like adult phase would be the most happiest part of someone's life, the commitments and responsibilities creates a hindrance for happiness to occur. So, I believe that teenage life is where people can have the utmost happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...adult phases, both bring happiness to a persons life. The scale by which we measure di...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e career choices out of their passion. Moreover adult life is when people can explore t...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eason they put forth is that, teenagers dont have any responsibilities unlike the ad...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
... it looks like adult phase would be the most happiest part of someones life, the commitments ...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
... it looks like adult phase would be the most happiest part of someones life, the commitments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01748251748 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56698846919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1691488575 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263627266972 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944918804633 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752637816677 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162375203044 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220658366272 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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