As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In this world of science and Technology,ability of individuals to think by themselves has completely changed.With more and more development in the field of science and technology,people are less inclined to use their brain nowadays.In this task we discuss as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate or not.Though Science has made a lot of advancements,it surely has made humans a bit lazy.
As nowadays everyone are able to surf on Internet,they are becoming more and more lazy day by day.If we get any problem instead of trying to solve it by own,people directly go on internet and start surfing there.The critical thinking of individuals is disappearing.We think it is of no use or it is waste of time to apply our brains to solve any particular problem when it is easily available in internet.This has affected the thinking capability of today’s generation.It is a very big problem.
In the olden days there was no much advancement in the field of technology but still people were able to solve problems by themselves.They were not that fast in reaching the solution as today we are but they used to atleast apply their brain in solving.Their critical thinking was far better than most of today’s generation people.Let us consider an example,If you are unable to solve any problem in any subject.If such problem used to arise in olden days people used to think,They used to think for hours,days and then also if they were unable to reach the solution they would use books or go their teachers for solution unlike today where most of us think for barely couple of minutes and if they don’t get they browse on Internet.Some people are so lazy to even think for couple of minutes and browse directly.
This is the reality of today.We are less inclined to use our brains.Internet is surely helping millions of people but it is also making them lazy by providing all facilities to users in minimal amount of time.Ability to think is gradually decreasing in teens today’s and we can see that effect in the exams.Most of the children are unable to solve simple problems because they are becoming more and more dependent on today’s technology instead of their brains.
Thus becoming more and more dependent on technology is not good.It is better if we use it when we are in need of it.For shorter problems we must use our brains and try to think, then only our critical thinking capability will improve.We must use technology in extreme or exceptional cases,we must remember that technology is for our convenience but we must also remember that we must not be dependent on it always.Thus if we use it more or extreme then our thinking capability is bound to decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91082802548 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06488802658 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416135881104 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 23.0359550562 408% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.031466948 60.3974514979 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.6 118.986275619 389% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.2 23.4991977007 401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 7.80617977528 615% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348157729435 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221732233334 0.0831039109588 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137340297795 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221732233334 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137340297795 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.8 14.1392134831 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 48.8420337079 -49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 12.1743820225 329% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.38706741573 134% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 11.2143820225 353% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 11.7820224719 340% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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