Some countries encourage teenagers to have a part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
The existence of different views in regards to part-time employment opportunities for teenagers in different countries is undeniable. There are supporters and opponents to this debate. In my opinion, adolescents also have an equal right to employment and the choice should be made by individuals rather than by the country on their behalf.
Irrespective of age and any other factor, a person should be able to earn money by using their skill if they wish to. Involvement in a job that rewards with a salary not only lead to the development of important characters such as punctuality, problem-solving, critical thinking and teamwork but also foster independence. Some people contradict to this by saying younger people in their tender age should enjoy their life. However, they do not realise that enjoyment these days comes with a price. Nothing is better than people being able to afford their own luxury. Different stories are heard where teenagers have worked and supported their family in the time of crisis which could not have been possible if the country had no policy to employ teenagers.
On the other hand, Adolescents are discouraged to have a job by the people and policy because they are thought to be immature. For example, many vacancies demand experience which does not really support the young population. There is another prominent opinion people often talk about that providing job opportunities to teenagers reduces the opportunity for young adults which in my opinion is very irrational because jobs are granted to those who have required skills, knowledge, attitude and experience.
To conclude, despite belonging to any age group, every individual has the right to choose for themselves and decide if they want to work. Hence, I am a strong advocate of the provision of part-time employment for teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
The existence of different views in regards to part-time employment opportunities for ...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...hey do not realise that enjoyment these days comes with a price. Nothing is better t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19191919192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87692656467 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4735835717 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165921397545 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523032600567 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051598082393 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100540403802 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379527830427 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.