Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
There is a prominent belief in the society that the native region of an individual has a profound influence on his success.In some cases we can observe a pattern of highly successful people emanating from a particular region and in some cases it is observed that certain famous, successful individuals are coming from not so prosperous regions. This essay will discuss if the native territory has an impact on a person's accomplishment.
Human beings have this unique ability to observe,learn,improve and succeed based on circumstances and experiences. A person who has spent their childhood in a region brimming with successful persons or has world class schools is more likely to triumph than a person who has grown up in a not so favourable circumstances. For example, Christiano Ronaldo one of the greatest footballers of all times, had developed a love for football since he grew up in a football loving locality in Portugal and also his talent was nurtured by the right coach in school. Hence, the region does have a major connection to the success of an individual
A person belonging to a developed and wealthy neighborhood will always have better access to infrastructure, technology, information etc. than a person belonging to an impoverished neighborhood. It can be argued that irrespective of the regions and circumstances, a person can accomplish many things in life with sheer hard work, grit and determination. Nevertheless, it becomes extremely difficult for such individuals to achieve success when compared to a person growing up in favorable circumstances.As an example, an individual growing up in an English speaking region will definitely have an edge over a non English speaking person while seeking jobs in a foreign country. These are evidences to suggest that a person's native region has a significant effect on his outstanding accomplishments.
In conclusion, this essay has argued about the relation ship between region and an individual's success.The advantages of growing up in a specific region are lot many and can definitely assist a person in becoming successful. I believe that the probability of a person becoming successful largely increases based on positive exposure he receives from his native region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1207.87684729 158% => OK
No of words: 358.0 242.827586207 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31843575419 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33986179659 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533519553073 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 379.143842365 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1379599369 50.4703680194 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 104.977214359 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31175426754 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127371049977 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744816680211 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211252109727 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559788639831 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.