Do you agree or disagree? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where events happen so rapidly than couldn't believe, it is important to aware of the news. Due to the increasing of population and establishing different commodities, numerous new events occur around the world. Accordingly, these events affect people's lives undoubtedly. This would be raise a question to how much is important to know about them. So, from my own perspective, follow the events which have most relation to someone's life is so important. For the countless reasons and examples, I will present the most essential and conspicuous ones here.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that following the news which is most related to people's lives, can help them to avoid some unpredicted interruptions. In fact, they can be aware of what occurs and be able to predict their effects on the process of their lives. As an illustration of this, consider the following example. When students follow all the University's news, they can aware of the good opportunities of scholarships and awards in a proper time, or by knowing some events such as closing dorm because of repairing actions, they are able to determine another place before being late.
Furthermore, awareness of the happening events is important because it increases people's knowledge about different aspects of life which may change the direction of their lives. Indeed, when people are well-knowledge can make right decisions to enhance the quality of their lives. A recent survey has been conducted at the University of MIT on about 2000 children, demonstrates who follow different news sources and are known about happening events, can make right decisions in the less time 65 percent more than others. Thus, it makes people more talent to properly handle their life.
Last but not least, the bad effects of not aware of happening events is that make people alone and inactive which gradually eliminate their happiness. This leads people to have less interactions in the pass of time, thus all of their lives change.
In conclusion, I strongly assert that the most important of awareness about the events happening around the world is its impact on people successful and their happiness. Therefore, following some events give them the chance to use various opportunities and predict several most likely effects of events to cope with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun interactions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1233933162 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76699605 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537275064267 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0891656929 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.722222222 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200061586589 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687266579145 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056105857389 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119112031098 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671873343346 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.