These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society, which means people use things in a short time and then throw them away. Causes and problems.
People in some parts of the world are said to adopt a “throw-away” lifestyle, which leads to the short duration of usage. Therefore, it is claimed that this phenomenon stems from several causes and there will be undoubtedly some negative consequences.
Two main factors are worthy of consideration when it comes to the reasons for this living trend. First, it is the negative peer pressure that manipulates people to follow this trend. In particular, in some a group of youngsters, a member will be ostracized if he or she cannot catch up with the up-to-date fashion or technological trends. As a result, in order to integrate into these modern communities, young generations have to alter their styles such as replacing old clothes or technological devices with the latest ones. Second, with the development of technology, items are manufactured at ease into different shapes and colors, which leads to the reduction of the price. Therefore, consumers can throw old things to try some items of different colors and models.
In terms of outcomes, this phenomenon exerts several disadvantages related to waste disposal and environment. To begin with, the more prevalent this trend is, the more trash and refuses are discarded to the landfill, which causes these places to handle an excessive amount of garbage.Therefore, this trend imposes burdens of subsidizing national budget to waste solution to governments. Furthermore, when the influx of disposal is present, hazardous chemicals used to produce items would increase and damage the environment. For instance, if people dispose of batteries unnecessarily, the amount of mercury- the main component of batteries will be accelerated to an alarming level that is of detriment to the natural habitats.
In conclusion, the extravagant lifestyle and the technological era are to blame for the throw-away phenomenon. This trend also has two major drawbacks affecting the action of managing waste and environmental protection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43225806452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27628250539 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1621859368 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200417556854 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670423844394 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949186976959 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136660482988 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101153324055 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.