You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include:
-Where you are going
-What the favor is
-Why you need this friend to help
Dear Tuan,
I hope this letter finds you well, my friend. I’m writing to ask if you could give me a hand taking care of my house this weekend.
As you’ve known, I’m having a 3-day business trip to Da Nang to close a deal for my company on this weekend. During this time, I couldn’t do my daily housework. So, It’d be nice if you could do me this favor while I’m gone.
Don’t worry, I won’t ask you to do any cleaning of the house. But, please keep an eye on my cat and feed him 3 times a day. There’s a sticker on the fridge which tells you how to feed him the right way and where you can find the food, so, be sure to give it a look. Also, since our neighbors have reported some robberies lately, please watch out for thieves at day and make sure every door is locked at night.
I’m sorry for any inconvenience but you’re the only one I trust since we’ve been good friends for ages. When I get back, let’s hang out and grab some drinks, my treats!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your friend,
Truong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4290738976 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2143752093 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294115924874 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130748559127 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776493599485 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182657942264 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632852153679 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.