Topic 10: some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than the human. Some people think this is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that computers will take over the position of people in terms of intelligence. There are many ideas about whether this phenomenon is beneficial or detrimental. From my perspective, despite the advantages computers bring, people still remain their values in our society.
On the one hand, computer science is advantageous in some certain aspects. Firstly, with the high technical advance, computers play a vital key in labor saving. In some factories, for instance, the production chains are now mostly controlled and directed by machines, which helps to save human resources as well as the budget of the firms. Secondly, the abilities of computers allow people to work and get access to a large amount of information. Therefore, it leads to the fact that human can unfold the limitation and also enrich the knowledge when exposing to the computer environment.
On the other hand, intelligent as they are, the drawbacks of computers are varied. In fact, without the instruction of human, computers could not run independently. So that, it is easy to notice when a computer is working, there is the appearance of the supervisor having the responsibility for checking the mistakes computers makes. Additionally, while the cognitive ability of people develops day by day, computers need to be updated their data and accessories in a period time such as every two months. Moreover, if the programmers do not upgrade the database for a computer, it will not be suitable for the high-speed development of information.
In conclusion, though computers may be considered more intelligent that, they cannot be compared to ordinary people since they still need support from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25461254613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01646015653 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2970015756 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186020469603 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624966698761 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289339600101 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109848096277 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00589856109635 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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