Some people say the Olympics is not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the Olympics is no longer fit and suitable in the 21st century. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view.
The first reason why I side with this belief is that organizing the Olympics will only bring forth more risks of getting terrorized these days. In the era of global terrorism, the Olympics will be the most vulnerable target to fearsome terrorists. Because this international event will attract and gather an enormous number of sports fans around the world at one place, this is the perfect chance for the underground organizations to carry out massive bomb attacks which even the surveillance of the FBI and the Interpol cannot fully cover. This means that if there is no more Olympic games, countries, especially the hosts, will no longer be afraid of such risks.
The second reason is that the extremely large people come to see the Olympics will definitely sabotage the host country in some aspects. While civilized sports supporters may take a large proportion, the minority of people with poor manners such as hooligans themselves can vandalize the entire event location. Some may disturb the locals whereas others raise conflicts with other visitors and cause violence. After the event is finished, the crowd returns home leaving the host country with a total mess. Again, the Olympic games are surely relevant in the 21st century when people get wealthier, yet, less civilized.
In conclusion, I assert that the Olympics is not suitable to be organized in this day and age due to the expansion of terrorism and vandalism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disturbs'.
Suggestion: disturbs
...ize the entire event location. Some may disturb the locals whereas others raise conflic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00381679389 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58927483138 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1326906501 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17436591733 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686480792515 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645074116722 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108935284625 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656839076191 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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