You are staying in rented accommodation. You recently held a party to celebrate your birthday. Several neighbors have complained about the noise to your landlord. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
• Apologize for the disturbance
• Explain the situation
• Say how you will correct the situation
Dear Mr.Vu,
I am writing this letter regarding the complaints of our neighbors about the disturbing noise from my birthday party last Saturday and thus, I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience.
Allow me to briefly explain my situation. Last week, I organized a party in which I invited some of my dearest friends and colleagues to celebrate my birthday in my apartment. This should have not produced any noise to disturb the other families living in the complex. However, my friends invited some of their acquaintances to join and as you can see, I could not reject any of them. This was when things got out of hand and the noise got extremely louder.
I know that my party interrupted other neighbors’ night and I would love to give away free tickets to the city’s upcoming musical concert to everyone living in the same block including you as a compensation for my disturbance. I hope that you could help me arrange this situation.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Vu
Dear Mr.Vu, I am writing this letter regarding th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... could help me arrange this situation. I am looking forward to your response. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, look, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93875652044 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.324592937 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223099401834 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945737834526 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763653491979 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131886657996 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508338358503 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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