Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
Suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the road construction work going on 45th North Street, Stoneham, MA. I am a 70 year old resident of Leisure lane on 45th North Street and have trouble with the noise pollution caused due to maintenance work going on the street just outside our apartment complex.
Let me explain my situation in detail. With my age and poor heart health it is very difficult to tolerate high decibel noises coming from the construction work. Therefore, the constant sound coming at odd night hours creates disturbances in sleep as well as overall health. Moreover, it also creates obstacles other fellow residents with similar age and health conditions.
Considering that the road work going on is extremely necessary for the upkeep of the town, can I please suggest a solution. Would you kindly change your work schedule from night to day time – office hours so, as to least disturb all the residents who are already at their work place. Additionally, you could also try and avoid weekends and create plan around weekdays for the same reason mentioned above.
Thanks you for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Seema
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ork place. Additionally, you could also try and avoid weekends and create plan around w...
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Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsideration. Yours Faithfully, Seema
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64122976557 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682051282051 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5613120972 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181533857539 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719451223077 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608128650674 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120605835228 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579885358652 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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