You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents.
Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter:
Introduce yourself.
Describe the problem.
Say what you think the council should do about the situation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Abhishek Singh, resident of Lotus boulevard from past 5 years. I am writing this letter in the reference to the new regulations which are in effect from March. The updations in the parking is completely irrelevant as it become hard to find a parking slot near the club house.
The new paid parking scheme has become a chaos to our colony. Firstly, the daily rates for the parking are very high and in order to avoid the parking ticket, people park their car to the club house due to which there is plethora of traffic congestion nearby it. During the evening time, it is hard to find a slot for parking while all the paid slots were vacant. Further more, people of our society started to park their on roads resulting in insecurity and road accidents.
I would like to suggest you to drop the fare of parking tickets unless it will be difficult to manage during the festive season. Further more you can add more parking space by turning the nearby park areas to the slots as there is enough green areas between the towers.
I hope you will take some adequate action towards this issue.
Yours faithfully
Abhishek Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... parking is completely irrelevant as it become hard to find a parking slot near the cl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62621359223 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22891667937 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1468758146 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805132908923 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340638358417 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358850982271 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613863927546 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414828683523 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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