Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
It is a good thought that people living in a developed world should act on the global climate change. Climate change is a issue which is adversely affecting life on earth. Thanks to the advancing technology, general people have more clear idea what climate change is and how it is going to change our future. Also, it is evident that people of developing countries and under developed countries usually follow the behavior of people belonging to developed countries. Hence, if people of developed countries change the way of their living in accordance to act on increasing environmental changes, individuals from other countries would surely follow them and a result help decrease the rising slope of climate change.
There are several reasons behind rapid climate change. Electricity generation and consumption on large scale is one of them. With growing population, day to day needs of people are growing. To meet the ends with these increasing demands, more efficient sources are found and utilized. Technology has provided us many solutions, for example electricity generation out of a nuclear plant. Now, this is a very efficient solution, but a recent example of accident at Fukushima nuclear plant gives us insight of the severe implications of having more such plants in order to meet our electricity needs. It is understandable that developed countries can have multiple nuclear plants to fulfill their growing electricity demands, but if governments of such nations think about the aftereffects on environment, and move towards energy source which are clean and less harmful for example, solar energy and water plants, it would be ideal for developing countries to use their example and act accordingly.
Furthermore, very small lifestyle changes like using sensors to make lights on and off, use energy efficient devices etc collectively will have more positive effects in order to increase efforts to slow down climate change. The more energy efficient we become, the more we will reduce our requirements, effectively saving environment.
Some people may argue about doing major changes in their lifestyle not being feasible compared to the climate change. As climate change is not a phenomenon which can be proved to someone with the help of some experiment, many people are reluctant to believe on whether or not it actually exists. Such people may argue that why to change one's life in saving something you are not even sure of. They may find it difficult and hence will not try and act on it. Sometimes it is very hard to change one's decades long habits in order to follow which they do not actually agree with. For example American people are used to not having switches to turn their electrical equipment on or off. If they change this small habit, considering overall population it will be very big effort taken towards environment safe lifestyle. But, for these people, it will not be small change, it will be a decades long habit, which they may find difficult to change, and thus, making the argument that it is not necessary.
Climate change a continuing phenomenon, with which we all need to adjust and try to improve our lifestyles accordingly. It is true that if citizens of developed countries take a lead into this, other people will surely follow them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2751.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07564575646 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70773351372 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474169741697 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 884.7 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.516205825 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335984535096 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088942337111 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541696641694 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170359963089 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460945570826 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.