Is medical science a boon or a curse for society or mankind?
The important effect of Medical Science was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of medical technology which is very beneficial for people has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in this year. Many people claiming that it is beneficial which others reject this notion. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational, and this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous benefits of medical science but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the X-rays are very good technique of seeing inside the body for diagnose. For instance, if the patient has broken the leg ligament or any fracture in the body, then with the help of X-ray it can be properly examined. Furthermore, lots of antibiotics have been founded by medical researchers like paracetamol. Therefore, the medical science is providing a lot of aid to people.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of medical science, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that nowadays, different types of drugs are made illegally via medical technology, so people can easily afford these drugs like some sleeping pills and become more addicted to them. As an illustration, according to the research, ample of teenagers died due to the consumption of drugs excessively. Hence, it is apparent, why many are against the medical technology.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of medical technology are instrumental indeed, however its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33807829181 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92714090859 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0362018073 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173747788267 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693886692613 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546544298568 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989789375695 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569725003391 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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