Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer. This problem cannot be avoided. ( To what extent do you agree)
First human beings lived about two million years ago. As well as, our nature was organize for peoples' benefits such as habitat and sustenance. These things also grew for human's subservience. Whereas, In the twenty first century, Technology equipment has been developing a day by day. As a result, Most of the people's lifestyle has already changed a variety way. As well as, A number of environmental damages and pollution is influenced nature by people's modern life habits and a countries development and becoming richer.
First of all, Our planet has approximately 270 countries and different 4 continents. Some of industrial countries metropolitan areas faced many issues such as air pollution soil erosion and water pollution. These damages are the influenced many way in our life. For example, In my country, we have been encountering the number of pollution. One of the biggest effective damage is based on people's activities such as car fuels and dwell fuels. In annual, Mongolian folks had burnt approximately 5 million ton of fuels. As a result, Some researchers improve that every year, 1600 people had begrudged by air pollution. Thus, Too much developing equipment also threat humans and nature.
On the other hand, Developed countries has always reconnoitre new things for their encouragement such as mining and petrolium which is the one of the most valuable natural resources in the world. As well as, It can described as the lifeblood of industrialized countries. However, It is the biggest resource of electricity. Since, It can endangered the many things certainly, environment. In my opinion, People or developing countries prefer to their benefits rather than nature health.
By the way of conclusion, If, Many individuals cannot preference their surrounding by nature, This many damages hasn't solved and avoided.
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...urrounding by nature, This many damages hasnt solved and avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28767123288 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9800503257 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9736392583 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170786131328 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438417116067 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058531368285 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105390645227 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02392169887 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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