Learning to play team sports is an important part of child's education. Do you agree or disagree. Include relevant examples from your own experience.
Sports which are play along with teams plays a vital role in the lives of children. These sports activities are essential for child's personality development as a kid learns about teamwork and coordination. I totally agree that child must learn team sports for educational and personal growth.
First and foremost, play a game along with other participants develops the sense of cooperation. In other words, each player in the team is assign with a set of responsibilities to achieve a common goal and other companions are bound to be cooperate to achieve a common goal. Same scenario applies when students work in academic project. Each student is assigned with the task such as presentation and documentation. They share thoughts with each other’s. Subsequently, they come up with good grades after project submission. Therefore, knowledge a child acquire via team sports is pivotal in education.
Secondly, sports which are play in the group tend to be more challenging and require techniques. These technicalities help in brain development of child and enhance the ability to think out of the box. For instance, a student who plays the cricket can have higher logical tendency as he decides what shot he should play under different fielding criteria to win the game. In addition, learning these skills produce the leadership qualities in the person which one can utilize at career stage.
To conclude, team sports provide an environment where student can learn group work strategies which directs helps in mind development. Thus, it is recommended for students to learn group sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
.... I totally agree that child must learn team sports for educational and personal gro...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her companions are bound to be cooperate to achieve a common goal. Same scenario ...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
... an environment where student can learn group work strategies which directs helps in ...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
...it is recommended for students to learn group sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26171875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94084074909 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0303401787 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191000105562 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663164744521 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612650661187 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12386033797 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060220531342 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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