Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling to the traveller?
Travelling is the major source of understanding new cultures. It is more than just fun. Nowadays, people are increasingly exploring the world by visiting more countries or cities than in the past. In this essay, I will put light on the reasons behind this and also the positive aspects of travelling.
First of all, why the attention of people diverts towards the travelling?. Firstly, travelling is becoming more convenient than before. For instance, one of the main travelling sources is aircraft that shorter the time and distance of farthest most country to in just a few hours or even we can travel within the country in a bird's eye view. Secondly, travelling companies give reasonable packages for singles, couples and for families included accommodation, tickets and many more services in reasonable price that cannot blow the pocket of the customers. So, the travellers are becoming more attractive towards travelling around the world.
Travelling has a lot of advantages. First of all, while we roam around the country and meet different people than we gain knowledge of the language and culture of that particular country. For example, we will learn about national food, dress, lifestyle, rules and regulations, their religion and most importantly their history. Secondly, it builds the relationship and creating new memories with different people for the lifetime. Furthermore, it boosts up the confidence to communicate with other people by telling and listening to stories and get some real-life education with their stories. You can also know yourself better than before. For example, facing different consequences in which you are never been before like sharing room.
To sum up, people are travelling more than before because of new inventions like an aeroplane and get confidence, communication, knowledge, self-assessment and most importantly building new memories for the rest of their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the farthest'.
Suggestion: of the farthest
...raft that shorter the time and distance of farthest most country to in just a few hours or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38870431894 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94453384723 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.8080535551 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4117647059 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354116713627 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13294921852 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104266886798 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222399367033 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105697039984 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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