farming is testing GM adds that are multifunctional and contain many types of benefit but it is also contain bad sides because it still mystic for people.
These days, farming is testing GM adds that are multifunctional and contain many types of benefit but it is also contain bad sides because it still mystic for people.
Firstly, GM products makes fruits and vegetables resistant to insects, fungal and viral pests that makes fruits and vegetables more fresh and provides high quality that cause high requirement also GM adds increase yields that is good for dry regions because there fruits and vegetables can not readjust to life. GM products make a prospect of lover chemical costs that makes economy of many countries much better that recent. Vegetables and fruits with GM adds make virus resistance and makes plants less susceptible to diseases, what can save people with terrible illnesses.
On the other hand, GM products cause potential risks to human health and the environment that makes GM products more dangerous that other chemical adds, also as for a matter of consumer preference. There are moments when people have allergy which caused of GM products that unusual for people’s consuming. Moreover, it can cause of placebo effect of any person that’s why placebo effect provides risk for health. This point, makes people’s minds opposed to genetic engineering. GM crops contain their own insecticide that also dangerous and harmful for people. GM products contain bad effects what influence on health.
Finally, farmers should choose GM adds carefully and make normal size of GM adds.
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| 2018-11-06 | lisa urazova | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61167059347 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8091850264 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369866138127 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168797134624 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245968324815 0.0667982634062 368% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325923425698 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.340944066546 0.056905535591 599% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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