Some people think that it is beneficial to sent young children to nursery school before they go to primary school, while other think that it is good to keep children at home with their parents. Discuss both views and give opinion.
Nowadays, the ideal age of acquiring education of children hold different views. Therefore, some people have favour of that, it is imperative to send younger children nursery classes before admission to primary school. However, others believe that children should remain with their parents before going to study. This write will discuss both views before formulating the opinion.
To begin with, the main reason of sending children to nursery classes is busy scheduled life of parents. As extra working and working slot for income, leads to no spare time for children, thus the play-way and crutch centres are being preferred by parents. A part from that, many educational institutes influence parents by play way learning method which intensify the admission of nursery classes. Secondly, it is widely accepted that children can learn swiftly at earlier age. For instance, in INDIA, most of people have lot of expectations from their children to obtain top grades in exams. Thus, the nursery schools are being preferred by parents to upgrade IQ of children at earlier age.
On the other hand, there are myriad tangible reasons why children should remain with their parents before study at primary school, Firstly, the health and diet care, as infants have need of special care which can be done by parents promptly. So it is very imperative for a child to stay with parents especially in earlier age. Furthermore, the adolescents can learn common morale values or manners and linguistic skills while they have conservation with their parents. This aspects also intensify the mutual bonding and emotional attachments. For example, A Australian based NGO have done survey “Baby talk” which shows around 70% of children gain linguistic skills while doing conservation with caregivers.
To Sum up, nowadays, it is very hard for parents to have spare time for children due to fast and busy life and expectations. Thus they prefer to send their children to nursery classes, IN my view, it would be beneficial to have perfect schedule of parents for children after school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22089552239 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57645662863 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555223880597 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.636830893 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322413020781 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112096896261 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745668929586 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222502550754 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749366237672 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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