Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree.
A hotly debatable issue today relates to that not all criminals should be kept in prison rather than allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. I disagree with this statement because i opine if government not give the salary to lawbrethen in public place more chance crime rates has increased.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning benefits if government kept the criminals in prison rather than in society. These include enhanced feel guilty, prevent violence in community and never try to do the crime. Firstly, criminals never thought again to do crime such as murder, car to steal and so on for this reasob it's crucial that authority more establish the infrastructure where culprit to teach the good lesson and encourages to do hardwork and learn to honesty with which they become to better citizen. Moreover, if government keep to culprit in prison then they always miss to the family members, with inside prisonthey more opportunities to earn money and contribute to stable the economy.
On the other hand, there are couple of drawbacks if culprit without any problems live in ordinary people. Secondly, they also expand to the violence and also prefer to new activities, with make to the gang members with which common people also feel disturb, annoying and unsafe. Additionally, they more like open to the narcotics bussiness like drugs, alcohol and so on and more attractive to the education youngster and affluent people that might be in upcoming years rape case and other crime to risen.
In conclusion, i feel that lawbreaker never to do the welfare work for society to owing it is necessary as soon as government catching the culprit them they learn to good lesson and when they come to out the prison they also help to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I disagree with this statement because i opine if government not give the salary...
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Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...to teach the good lesson and encourages to do hardwork and learn to honesty with whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d other crime to risen. In conclusion, i feel that lawbreaker never to do the we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55397511517 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8256419295 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.3 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209166077709 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874641369029 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129567644991 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139707659204 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985741488149 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.