Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several people argued that those who commit crimes should not put in jail. Instead, they should do voluntary work in social community. I strongly agree that this issue should be implemented for two main reasons.
The first reason of why I agree with this opinion is because it helps them for having better communication and social engagement. Becoming volunteers, it means such criminals will work in team in order to do social activities within the community. Obviously, this situation will train them how to communicate effectively and delivering their own ideas. For example, in prison for women in Indonesia held hand-crafting workshop regularly, this is not only enable those women who commit crimes to enhance their skills in hand-crafting, but also they make their own connectivity in their community They also learn how to engage with others, this will help them to be the best version of themselves and make them better citizens.
The final and the most crucial reason is due to avoid the negative influence that prison can have. For instance, one study was conducted by The U.S Department of Justice found that more than half of prisoners are diagnosed with mental health disorder. This is not uncommon conditions anymore because they interact less with their siblings; they probably think that they will loose their future; and many forms of another negative stigma about them whereby eventually bringing them into frustration.
To sum up, allowing criminals to be useful in the local communities by having unpaid work is essential as it could be make significant contribution into society and less mental health issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22264150943 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67521887195 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6390209392 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216123442457 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092414056735 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671400764331 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149109819048 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820444067824 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.