You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Home is a dominating part of a person’s character. Some people stay at a place all their life, other finds a part of home anywhere they live, learning from any challenges they face. I think I would have both positive and negative attitude towards the experience.
First, I love exploring new places, therefore, it would be an opportunity to navigate myself beyond the reach of my own country. A new place is an open gateway to new culture, community and people, learning about them would broaden my perspective about life. The experience gained through this would help me improve my personality, by identifying similarities and differences in the behaviors of people in different countries.
Secondly, it would open up opportunity to work across the world and learn new languages. Studying abroad eradicates the fear of living away from family and homeland. Therefore, it gives opportunities to work anywhere in the world as well as courage to do so. It would help to rise through the ranks without the barrier of terrain.
On the other hand it would be a difficult transition from leaving my own country and tutelage of my parents affection to resettling in a foreign land. Learning their culture might be fun but adjusting to their lifestyle might take time. It is always difficult to be accepted in the society that has not nurtured you. I would miss the comfort and home cooked meal provided by my family. Getting homesick might be scary but a positive attitude towards change might help overcome the emotions.
Leaving home for college is a difficult task but leaving your country might be more challenging task that a person has to deal with. With a disciplined attitude and a positive outlook towards new opportunities, in my opinion will help me most to adjust and be accepted in the foreign land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91856677524 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631459922 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.390320376 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635884815676 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022437014812 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318085949998 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327942081054 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110174406081 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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