Do you think formal written assessments in today's world to assess students performance is effective or not? Discuss your viewpoint on this and support your answer with examples.
There are some debates regarding the effectiveness of the way that the students are assessed nowadays. Some people believe that written assignments are not an efficient way to evaluate the performance of the students, whereas others believe that formal assessments reflect the actual capacity of the person to show how well the content was absorved. This essay will discuss why it is important to make this decision according to the subject or course chosen from person to person, which may vary and require different ways to understand the performance review.
While I believe that every subject requires a system of evaluation, it is important to discuss the most suitable way to perform this evaluation among different students. Some disciplines require distinct maneer to run assessments. Some courses such as Cookery and Arts are better assessed when executing the student's practical skills of cooking, painting and playing, for example.
On the other hand, there are some courses that need to see how well the student can write and answer the questions regard specific content. On this case, subjects that are related to language, history and writing lessons should assess pupil's abilities to perform grammar and vocabulary when writing formal essays and assignments.
To sum up, it is important to seek for formal written assessments from the students in order to determine whether the student has absorved the content lessioned or not. Therefore, I believe that it is necessary to make different decisions considering the diversity of subjects that demand different systems of evaluation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74680005767 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8461633428 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200827324907 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832258165433 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537217798275 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126101411495 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269497323909 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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