Some people think that it is better for a child to grow in the country side than in the city,others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Cities are seen as a destination of opportunities where everyone has an equal chance of accomplishing their dreams. Therefore, a large section of people is migrating to cities, to ensure a good future for themselves and their kids. However, not everyone agrees with it. They argue that the countryside is more viable for the kids than the cities. In my perspective, I have no doubt that cities are a much better option than villages.
Firstly, the infrastructure for healthcare lacks significantly in the villages. Due to this, the child mortality rate is higher in villages. For instance, In India, more kids have died due to dengue in villages than in cities. Secondly, most of the villages do not have educational institutions beyond high school. Owing to this, most of the kids do not get to complete their education. Thirdly, villages are not diverse demographically. Therefore, kids do not get to know and learn from interacting with people from different backgrounds thereby limiting their intellectual growth. Hence, it can be seen that cities are a suitable option for raising the kids.
On the other hand, villages are free of air and noise pollution. This enables the kids to grow in a healthy environment and allowing them to become strong physically. Moreover, life in cities can be very stressful due to immense competition for survival which could lead to depression. These points can be considered as a positive point to support the idea of raising the kids in the rural area.
All in all, according to me, the benefits of raising the kids in cities far outweigh than nurturing them in the villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0110701107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91603050197 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1214119775 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979363388135 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307528301683 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290569862388 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574116322494 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280100273687 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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