Some people claim that it is the responsibility of some individuals to protect environment, while others consider that the government should take the main responsibility. Discuss both views
It is widely believed that environmental protection is an essential action these days. However, whether individuals or the government take responsibility for this has caused heated debate. In my opinion, I would argue that the government should corporate with citizens to conserve the environment
There are two primary reasons why individuals should be responsible. First, it is obvious that human activities have the greatest impact on the environment. According to the news, humans dump a million tons of rubbish into the ocean annually, which damage our ocean ecosystem and the habitats of marines. Therefore, humans are able to solve this problem by avoiding using throwaway products and sorting daily garbage. Second, parents are likely to raise their children’ awareness of protecting the environment by stopping littering and wasting natural resources such as water or electricity, which may have a long-lasting effect. By doing this, we will fight climate change in the long term.
Some people strongly advocate that the government should tackle environmental problems. This is due to the fact that the government can spend million dollars on doing scientific research to prevent greenhouse effect, which is a potential threat to human beings. Another point to consider is that the government enact a law, which a heavy fine or prison sentence. This is an essential punishment for an action of destroying the environment. Consequently, our environment will become greener and cleaner.
In conclusion, both arguments are truly reflected of the possible consequence of environmental protection, it seems to me that the government and individuals are both responsible for environmental conservation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16212796301 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5056961383 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229428926549 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734543149432 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842252491885 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148178837875 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596791284956 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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