Benefits and drawbacks Travelling
In the last few decades, travelling is feasible due to modification in migration system in many nations. Despite the travelling is feasible, it has a several merits and demerits. I believe that benefits of travelling over shadowed the drawbacks of travelling. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling.
First and foremost, with proliferation travelling, tourism industry is developed well and become a backbone of economy of many nations. Furthermore, Many people are employed in air and tourism industry. Apart from this, local people enjoy higher standard of life because government provide better sevices like roads, water supply etc. to visitors.
Secondly, travelling compact the gaps of cultural and traditional understanding and play an integral role for culture exchanges. As a inllustation, every year many people travel to holy city of varanashi in India, to know traditions of indian culture. Apart from this, travelling plays important role to share science and technology with other and nations to make world better.
On other hand, travelling has drawbacks too. One major drawbacks is people carry harmful viruses and bacterias with themselfs. While travelling these virus and becteria speard across areas of world. As an illustration, in 2017 Indian government identify Nipha virus, that was carried by man from malashyia. As a result, more than 100 people died with nipha virus.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is necessary to overcome the drawbacks of travelling to make world better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, well, while, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34677419355 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87323216245 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8443480071 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338567583735 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11686957456 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138075487036 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180243151307 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961064281169 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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