Deciling of farming profession among youth. Reasons and solutions.
Today’s youth are less interesting in agriculture process due to which it is dwindling in many countries , eventhough farmers are the only persons who are responsible for feeding people. Farming is the important and integral part of the nation’s development. It needs to be preserved fast.
Firstly, there are many reasons behind the abolishment of farming practices all around. It is to be considered outdated profession these days. People are finding less profits and much hard labour in this particular occupation. Secondy, policies of government much more leads to the dissatisfaction among farmers which leads them to come under huge debt. Thirdly, newer generation does not wants to follow the legacy of their forefathers by continuing this traditional job. They are attracting towards the new opportunities in other fields like IT , corporate sectors , international trade , etc. Moreover , climatic factors and globalisation are the main reasons comprising of the declining of this practice.
Furthermore, there could be some solutions there to eradicate this problem like government could prove to be very beneficial to enocourage this trade. Setting of procurement prices should be good. So that, the farmers get equal wages for the equal work. Basic facilities like water and electricity should be provided according to their jeeds. In addition to these, in the case of any calamities , government should come up with some back up plan for them. Encouragement of farming among youth is much needed. For instance, more channels like ‘kisanbani’ should be aired on radio which can prove helpful on agriculture science and giving knowledge to youth in modern and easy ways.
In my opinion, farming needs to be saved and nourished in efficient ways. Livelihood of people completely depends upon it. Country like India , where ‘Green Revolution’ once saved the economy in the past , should not be forgeted. Steps should be taken to aware youth in thus direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45161290323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14014771452 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603225806452 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4290935641 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136800885573 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451338757814 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703524265243 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808853136889 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024312324015 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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