Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Through history, education has always played a prominent role in individual’s lives regardless of the complication of methods to educate people. While education always has faced difficulties, vast majority of people may opt for today’s education as the one with much more obstacles, I, contrary to this predominant convention, personally believe that for technological role in today’s life education was much more difficult in the past. The following paragraph will aptly substantiate my view point in next paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mention is that, statistically there were a few number of schools back then. To illustrate, schools were not available for a great number of children and they didn’t had the chance to easily get to school each day to continue their academic life. as an example when I was child and not satisfied with school my grandmother started to talk about her childhood .she announced that there wasn’t any school in her town and she had to go to another town once a week for education. Intercountry traveling in the past, due to lack of sufficient roads and low quality roads reveals that travelers had to cope with different problems to get to another city in the past. This problem self-indicates lots of hardships of education in past days.
Another significant point is that, visual learning and experiments are important factors in teaching. Teaching methods and books were not as complicated as today and didn’t contain much elaboration in the past. Schools were not facilitated enough to let students do lots of experiment in order to hasten learning. Statistics reveals the fact that visual aids such as watching relevant videos in classroom, visually rich books, and experiments in laboratories are playing an extensive role in education. Not many years ago, when I was second grade in elementary school, there was no projectors and laboratories that students could get use of it in that school. Later when I was fifth grade in elementary school, with the growth of technology, our school was promoted to prevailing technology and we eventually had laboratories. That year I felt a great expedition in learning in comparison to the past years.
The last but not least, despite the fact that nowadays children spend much time on cell phone, online games and social networking websites, there is evidence showing that besides its drawbacks, these activities lead to much intelligent children who can learn with more agility. Prime examples of such practical advantage are my cousins, at the age of 9 they are fully aware of what’s going on in society in addition to containing lots of information in scientific fields in comparison to 9 year-old people in the past. Also, these video games can be used to teach lessons with more joy to students. They can spend more time on learning without getting tired of it aptly explains the “play and learn" phrase. I personally believe that the type of video games and the time children spend on virtual technologies can be controlled by parents to help eliminate the disadvantageous sides of these activities and use its beneficial features.
To make a long story short, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that educating children was a more difficult task in the past in the comparison to what it is today. It is suggested that parents take on their part in the utilizing of Modern items and oversee their children preventing abuse and over use of these items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, while, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 99.0 52.1666666667 190% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2965.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14756944444 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00452925764 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 919.8 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3184348701 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.772727273 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235866469406 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621070494376 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593866555962 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129175543744 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474218242208 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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