The internet has transformed the way information is shared and are the most serious problems associated with the internet consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the reasons and what are the solutions.
The e-media has, without doubt, changed the method of receiving and sending information leading some serious problems not imagined a couple of years ago. This essay would analyze and discuss the worst possible hurdles and its remedies.
To begin with, fake and distorted news, viral messages as well as obscene videos on the social sites have wreaked the social fabric. Admittedly, Internet has become the most powerful weapon in the hand of antisocial elements to spread social hatred, conflict and disharmony. Mushrooming incidents of rapes and kidnapping have shaken the modern and sophisticated society. To prove my point, riots and gory occurrences in Haryana, Gujrat and U. P. in India and strife between white and black people in the U.S.A. are the perfect testimony. Secondly, cyber crimes such as withdrawing money from bank account of innocent people by unknown and steeling secret information connected to Defence forces by hackers is another grave concern caused due to internet. For instance, a recent survey by National Crime Record Bureau concluded that there is a significant surge in inhuman and barbaric activities all around the world in general, and developing countries, in particular.
Nevertheless, several major judicious measures need be taken to address these complex problems. The first and the best obvious solution is to make stringent law against those who are trying to spread rumours threatening our society. Moreover, Founders of social sites such as face book, whats app and instagram must be strict towards anti social elements so that untimely and bloody events may be checked or stopped from being materialized. For example, they can tighten up the security system by creating a strong password and using multi factor Authentication when possible. Establishing multi-dimensional public-private collaborations between different agencies, institutions, and industries could go a long way to protect the masses from being vulnerable. What is more, Moral and social pressure of local bodies such as panchayats and other non-governmental organizations over young generation can also help to mitigate this widespread problem.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that it is not possible to reverse the march of technology, but effective legislation by the government and collective efforts by the people are inevitable to combat the menace.
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- 1 Topic some people believe that internet will not change the trend of newspaper of getting news Agree or disagree 64
- The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies that have the same function. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Prevention is better than cure. Out of country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree to the statement. 89
- Topic 11: Some people say that online study is the most effective and convenient way to learn. Others believe that online study will never be as effective as learning at school, in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50953678474 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98970350238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694822888283 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0215188069 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133165041729 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303950720015 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374174333905 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591351740621 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349463157713 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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