What are these causes of environmental pollution? What should be done to deal with this problem?
In more recent decades, we have seen the environmental pollution is a hot topic in the world. Several types of environmental threats that we face to face are air pollution, soil pollution and water pollution. To solve this problem, we have to recognize some causes of this.
The first cause is industrialization. There is an alarming increase in the number of factories or industrial estates. They bring many work opportunities but they also bring more and more environmental threats. They emit a large number of smog day by day. We can see much more type of toxic gases in industrial smog, such as CO2, CFC, CO,… Beside harmful health effect, it is a reason of greenhouse effects, such as global warming, climate change, extreme weather conditions,… Especially, overuse of fossil fuels can make us face to exhausted gases in the future.
The second cause is urbanization. Nowadays, human ready encroach upon natural areas to build houses, transportation. Forest areas is decreasing because of deforestation everywhere. It leads to ecological imbalance. Besides, in few year, we see a massive increase population with a huge domestic wastes, particularly, hard decompose waste. It’s really too terrible to imagine what “nature Mother” is flooded with wastes.
Agricultural activities are the last cause of environment pollution. These farmers overuse fertilizer, pesticide, herbicide in cultivation and breeding. The chemical redundancy in farming worsen water and soil qualification, even our health.
This is a difficult problem to solve even though human recognize that fact and find the way to deal with it. Nowadays, some countries use renewable energy resources in their life and manufacturing, for instance: solar power, wind forms, tidal power. Besides, many people, in particularly young human, also create environmentally friendly products and use them. Recycle activities and clean farming activities are encouraged in the world. And I think the most important issue is how to change people’s awareness to protect our habitat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, so, as to, for instance, i think, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50314465409 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18864203022 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3868439193 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187479014558 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448369698551 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543588090596 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869339169346 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485289498689 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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