The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The comparison of the population aged 65 years and older between 1940 and 2040 in usa, sweden, and japan is represented by the graph.
three colored lines which are green, red, and black represents sweden, japan, and the usa respectively. The horizontal axis has the unit in years (ranges 1940-2040) whereas the units for the vertical axis is in percentage(ranges from 0 to 30). In the year 1940, the population percentage for all three countries is minimal with respect to the upcoming years.
Green and black line are in progressive order while the red line is declining in the initial stages but can be seen steep in the end. Moreover, in 1940, the black line is at the apex and the red line is at the lowest among all three. However, the vice-versa can be seen for red and black line in the year of 2040.
Notwithstanding the percentage of sweden and usa lies between 20 to 25 percent, japan shows the percentage above 25 in the year 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...65 years and older between 1940 and 2040 in usa, sweden, and japan is represented...
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Suggestion: Three
...d japan is represented by the graph. three colored lines which are green, red, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, whereas, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62721893491 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67125522847 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.664371335 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199672816582 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974763524889 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971368977418 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152915273133 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109542188727 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.