Parents should be held legally responsible for their children act. What is your opinion.
The importance of the parents responsibility for their offsprings are always debatable . but now become more controversial, because pupils are foundation of the country. I will discuss this topic and my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, parents always take care of their kids from birth to young age, so that they know all the weaknesses of their offspring. Secondly, pupils learn all ethical values from their parents, because parents are first teachers for the kids. Moreover, parents play an important role in children life, because they complete their needs in the childhood and the give them company when they have any difficulty.
On the flip side, but always parents are not responsible for children’s act, because sometime they cover the weaknesses of themselves. Furthermore, when pupils go for studying outside from the homes, due to which they far away from their parents, then parents are not responsible for children’s act, therefore teachers are also equally important for students. Besides this, children feel more independent due they like to take decisions themselves.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. but my point of view is parents are not responsible for the children’s act, because now pupils are over confident, they don’t take advise from their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...their offsprings are always debatable . but now become more controversial, because ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...likewise this topic also has mixed bag. but my point of view is parents are not res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89910571685 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567441860465 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4458368881 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279900117266 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119324944965 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886941188452 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187304503359 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389359897294 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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