Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
Nowadays, It is believed that people have more options in comparison to the past. In my opinion, choices are increased in some aspects, while they are decreased is some others.
On the one hand, I am in the position that we have tons of choices when we are going to purchase something. In the past, options were only limited to the thing that one could find in nearby stores or shopping malls. In contrast, because of great improvement in technology, individuals can exploit these improvements in every aspect of their life generally, and in shopping particularly. One sample is the emergence of the internet and online shopping websites such as amazon.com where people can select, order and deliver anything they want in an eye blink.
On the other hand, I think that we have limited number of choices for example in job vacancies. Once upon a time, everyone who graduated from the university could opt his or her desired vocation. In contrast, newly graduated people would have really less possible open job vacancies. To give an example, imagine recently graduated doctors and compare them with their old counterparts. Junior doctors have to accept the first job they have been offered otherwise, they may not find any appropriate career.
To sum up, I believe that there is an increase in the number of options which people have in several aspects and there is also a reduction in some others. While we have too many choices for example in shopping, we may be deprived of options in finding a suitable job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, while, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85328185328 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62290925441 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0702067945 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17387053572 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065247605006 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560740168696 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123782148449 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06058026251 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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