Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Music plays an important role in an individual's life. In today's modern education system, many people think that music should be given equal amount of importance as formal academic subjects like maths, history, science. However, many other think that this is an moot subject and should considered carefully. This essay completely agrees that music must be consider as an essential and important subject like other subject in school including preschool grade. This essay will delineate some of the important points to support this.

Firstly, music makes learning a fun activity where children at preschool level can able to learn numbers, alphabets, and poems in an easy way. For example, according to the latest study released by the national society for children development, more then 80% of the preschool students who are studying music as a mandatory subject in their course performed better then their peers who are having music as an elective subject. This study clearly indicates that music player a major role in kids development in early age during preschool term.

Secondly, music also helps children to develop other essential qualities like sympathy, empathy, and compassion. Many studies suggested that music helps to develop an all rounder personality. Music at the school will also make the school a fun place to go. For instance, according to the latest survey conducted by social science institute of Canada, more than 90% parents reported an improvement in their kids behaviour after attending music subject in their preschool. Hence, it is proven the importance of music.

In conclusion, the importance of music can't be ignored at school level, mainly at preschool phase. It helps to make the school a fun place to go. Moreover, it helps kids to develop a fine personality.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23183391003 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62575273239 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2406364772 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 6.9802955665 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24753119415 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905606582107 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623178859871 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159656044322 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225412036787 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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