some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt.
it is argued that great leaders are born, however, some people believe that leadership skills can be developed through learning, training, experience and so on. In my view, to become a good leader, we can have both natural talent and practical.
On the one hand, it is said that leaders are born. First, great leaders can move from parents to children. With a great mother, she will have some features in her mind and then, when she gives birth to her child, who will inherit some good features from her mother.
However, leadership skills can be created by the life skills.First, we can study it from our teachers, some developed ourselves courses and so on. Those above can help us become more confident and gain more experience. Furthermore, we should develope themselves everyday and set up some good purposes, then follow them. my older sister, for example, who used to very shy. but she has a dream of becoming a leader, a director.she has tried to do something to do it such as joining many life skill courses, meeting a lot of great people ... And then, she has achieved her dream and has become a great leader.
In conclusion, I think that leadership skills can be not only born, but also learned through training, experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is argued that great leaders are born, ...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...kills can be created by the life skills.First, we can study it from our teachers, som...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...thermore, we should develope themselves everyday and set up some good purposes, then fol...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...p some good purposes, then follow them. my older sister, for example, who used to ...
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Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ter, for example, who used to very shy. but she has a dream of becoming a leader, ...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...used to very shy. but she has a dream of becoming a leader, a director.she has tr...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...o do something to do it such as joining many life skill courses, meeting a lot of gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82790697674 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56778808808 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6796259396 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240758935436 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910886970444 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104424324971 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180571503544 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792551683019 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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