Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Industrialization is posing a great threat to our Environment in the last decade. It has brought a drastic climatic change. Some people say that burning fossil fuels is essential for our economic growth as many industries are reliant on it others say that now is the time to move to more conventional resources like wind, solar power. In my opinion, we should start a transition from fossil fuel to alternative energy resources majorly as it a much cleaner energy resource and boost our economic growth. I will discuss these points in these points in the below paragraph with relevant examples.
First of all, using alternative energy resources has already begun in many developing countries where huge plants for solar and wind have been set up by the government to create energy source which does help to reduce the pollution and climatic change. Governments globally have realized that climatic changes have already begun to take place whereby many great lakes have vanished thus affecting the natural habitat of animals, temperatures have begun to rise especially in the Arctic which has resulted in melting of ice caps thus threatening to increase the sea level which could submerge many cities. Quality of the air we breathe in certain countries is so bad, that people are advised to wear masks outside and use air purifiers at their home all as a result of pollution that is being created by burning fossil fuels. In India, pollution effects can be seen in Delhi where air quality index is in a hazardous range which can lead to many diseases.
Secondly, many governments around the globe are now encouraging the use of alternate energy resources by setting up plants and thus leading to economic growth. India houses the world’s largest solar plant, which paves way for many jobs. Similar steps are being taken by other the United States which has concentrated on wind energy and are harnessing this source by setting up wind plants in Arizona. Apart from this, there has been a paradigm shift in the technology in last two decades whereby automobile companies are focusing on the production of electric and solar cars thus creating a separate industry itself and boosting the economic growth.
As per the arguments mentioned above and in conclusion I would say that the time has come to move from traditional energy sources to alternate energy sources as it will help protect our climate and lead to economic progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00491400491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61710785833 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528255528256 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5612953426 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0714285714 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197409528435 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694566699437 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600682714003 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123770599552 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514196049267 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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