1. For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
• state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
• give details on how you have benefited from the club
• explain why you want to leave
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to make your attention towards discontinuation of my club membership.
I have a premium membership in your club and I use my credit card for the payment of my membership fee.
I gained a lot of benefits due to my premium membership. I availed a 20 % discount on every event. Moreover, club faculty gave me more preference during peak hours as compared to other members and also I was allowed to bring my 3 guests with me.
Now, I am planning to go to Australia for my post-graduate in construction management and I will take around 2 to 3 years. So, I do not wants to continue my membership in your club so, please discontinue my membership on urgent bases.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours Sincerely,
Nadeem Matloob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for the payment of my membership fee. I gained a lot of benefits due to my prem...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... benefits due to my premium membership. I availed a 20 % discount on every event....
^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
...take around 2 to 3 years. So, I do not wants to continue my membership in your club ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69852941176 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05455048264 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8894927492 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284922431554 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118908729344 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997289606422 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186738524407 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890079170696 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.