Some people believe that laws change human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree.
Change is the law of nature, so that people have to face many change time to time . Many people think that laws laws change the behaviour of human. I am partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, when people follow the laws then they can save themselves from many difficulties, like accidents. Secondly, Laws become helpful in decreasing the crime rate from the country, because when people will fear from the punishments, which get after the crime, than they will not participate in the crimes. Moreover, law become helpful to get justice for victim.
On the flip side, while some people think that they have to face many problems due to law on the road and another place, likewise they have to follow many rules driving time, which change their behaviour like stop on the red lights and wear the helmet . Besides this, sometime criminal save from the laws with help of money and punishment get the victim.
In conclusion, it can be said that every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But my point of view is government should make the proper rules, The person who try to break the law, he should get strict punishments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70935960591 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26756348101 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3230605704 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24027129727 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109751149677 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116280714287 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15562685773 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122427965863 0.0609392437508 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 55.0591133005 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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